RonRandom's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Invisible Human]

Umm.... Okay? I liked how you tried to mix electro and classical together, but there were a lot of things that need improving. First, your beginning didn't go too smooth. I'd suggest adding less sounds first then progress to the beginning of your song. Your piano really lacks dynamic. I mean all the notes are played at the same volume, which doesn't sound pleasing.

Now moving on to the next part of your song, which is :27. The hi-hats seemed a bit too loud for me. The hi-hats should've been a bit slower, then goes fast at :54 It could really use a bass instead of the piano playing alone, as it felt real empty. And no, the piano bass doesn't count.

Then there's :54, the moment where there's changes, and there's the piano and a flute-sound playing. Nothing much to criticize here as anything that goes beyond this is just the same thing, which was really boring. Overall, eh, I see what were you trying to do there, but still, eh.

ZtpRapheephat responds:

Ill try more
Thx 8)

[LoToss - idk the name now xD (wip)]

Huh. Um. Not much to say about it. The distortion at the beginning was a bit unsettling for me. It sounded pretty decent until :23 and :51, that is when you threw in the ride which was incredibly loud. You could've changed some notes in the melody during :45. And you could've also add a bass to go with your main melody to spice things up a little. I can really see your inspiration from K-on! although I don't really watch the anime that much. Overall, eh.

P.S. Just try experimenting with your melodies and listen to some great tracks, and probably you'll find one? That's how I do it when I can't think of a good melody.

ItsALoToss responds:

Thanks, it is just some "training" for so fast and crazy track. So, I'm interested in the opinion only about drums. And beginning - the hardest part for me, 90% of my tracks still-born because I cant begin it. Here I'm don't care about beginning, it is just for fill the space.

[iIF350Ii - Finale - Final boss remix]

Hmm... It's okay? The intro and 0:43 seemed a bit too slow to me and I think it just needed somewhat more of a buildup. Really love how you put your own style into this song, but I think you could've at least add some more stuff in the mix to spice and did something at the end to make it more interesting because I don't really see the energy in this remix of yours. Overall, it's "okay". Nothing great for me really.

[Neon Paradise (Short version)]

Well, good job. You actually made me imagine I was in a beach-styled racetrack in of those Mario Kart games. ( or is it Mario Cart? )

[Check Your Reality]

Hmm....Now listening to the song itself reminds me that I'm in a space-like environment, and the echo-ish snares gives more of that space-like environment thing. I can tell that it is nice compared to your other stuff that you uploaded, although the robot-like vocals seem a bit too quiet for me especially in the middle of the song where the beats all come together and the beginning of the song where there's also the female vocals, so I suggest you to turn it up a bit. And the fade out of the song seemed weird to me because of the female vocals echoing, so I suggest you to make the female vocals more quieter and quieter at the fade out of the song when all the beats are done with their thing. Overall, it's just nice.

ShadowShinobiTunes responds:

Thanks for the criticism

[I Know]

The piano really felt a bit classy to me although it did felt a bit like it was just randomly being pressed around, and that part where the piano just loops was pretty unexpected and caught me off guard. I liked how you used the vocals in this song.

The song is really legit though. You really saw a nice opportunity to do something dope, and I respect that. I would love to hear something more hard, or something kinda more 'transcending' as I would put it. But still nice.