RonRandom's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Alan Walker - Sing Me To Sleep + Dex Arson - Rampage [ Mashup ]]

Shit, I don't know what's better, Marshmello's remix or your remix. The way you two just use the song itself and reshape to make it look like it's brand new is just epic. My favourite part would mostly be :53, where you just stack the vocals AND the growls all together, that's just pure eargasm. And although this song is pretty great, I just have one problem with it, I just don't feel the beginning was going all smoothly. Other than that, this is just awesome.

[|Koji Kondo| Koopa's Theme (Xythisdi Cover)]

Damn this song makes Bowser look so badass. Although I'm not an expert on guitars and drums, I could tell you that I really like this cover, so good job!

Xyhthisdi1987 responds:

Thank you very much :)

[Flstudio 2018 FF7? Fighting BGM ?!]

Hmm.... I'm getting those Pokemon vibes... I mean, some parts of the song were kind of off-key, especially at the beginning, and I don't know if that was on purpose or not, but it felt weird. The drums could've been a bit louder. I'm really digging into that church organ through the song. Needs a bit more details on it, but other than that, it's OK I guess.

lonce520 responds:

oh :3
i am so sorry :3
i just make a noise
and just little like FF7 battle bgm :3
so i done this :3

[Invisible Human]

Umm.... Okay? I liked how you tried to mix electro and classical together, but there were a lot of things that need improving. First, your beginning didn't go too smooth. I'd suggest adding less sounds first then progress to the beginning of your song. Your piano really lacks dynamic. I mean all the notes are played at the same volume, which doesn't sound pleasing.

Now moving on to the next part of your song, which is :27. The hi-hats seemed a bit too loud for me. The hi-hats should've been a bit slower, then goes fast at :54 It could really use a bass instead of the piano playing alone, as it felt real empty. And no, the piano bass doesn't count.

Then there's :54, the moment where there's changes, and there's the piano and a flute-sound playing. Nothing much to criticize here as anything that goes beyond this is just the same thing, which was really boring. Overall, eh, I see what were you trying to do there, but still, eh.

ZtpRapheephat responds:

Ill try more
Thx 8)

[Outside Siref]

Damn. This feels so damn nice. It's almost like I'm playing a video game or something. That violin just playing that melody stacked along with so other things was so damn good. But I really feel like it could've had a better beginning with less sounds while gradually progressing and introducing all the sounds like in :02. In my opinion, you should add the melody at the end, but play it very faint for that sweet sound. Overall, I'm impressed.

[LoToss - idk the name now xD (wip)]

Huh. Um. Not much to say about it. The distortion at the beginning was a bit unsettling for me. It sounded pretty decent until :23 and :51, that is when you threw in the ride which was incredibly loud. You could've changed some notes in the melody during :45. And you could've also add a bass to go with your main melody to spice things up a little. I can really see your inspiration from K-on! although I don't really watch the anime that much. Overall, eh.

P.S. Just try experimenting with your melodies and listen to some great tracks, and probably you'll find one? That's how I do it when I can't think of a good melody.

ItsALoToss responds:

Thanks, it is just some "training" for so fast and crazy track. So, I'm interested in the opinion only about drums. And beginning - the hardest part for me, 90% of my tracks still-born because I cant begin it. Here I'm don't care about beginning, it is just for fill the space.

[iIF350Ii - Finale - Final boss remix]

Hmm... It's okay? The intro and 0:43 seemed a bit too slow to me and I think it just needed somewhat more of a buildup. Really love how you put your own style into this song, but I think you could've at least add some more stuff in the mix to spice and did something at the end to make it more interesting because I don't really see the energy in this remix of yours. Overall, it's "okay". Nothing great for me really.

[Neon Paradise (Short version)]

Well, good job. You actually made me imagine I was in a beach-styled racetrack in of those Mario Kart games. ( or is it Mario Cart? )

[Check Your Reality]

Hmm....Now listening to the song itself reminds me that I'm in a space-like environment, and the echo-ish snares gives more of that space-like environment thing. I can tell that it is nice compared to your other stuff that you uploaded, although the robot-like vocals seem a bit too quiet for me especially in the middle of the song where the beats all come together and the beginning of the song where there's also the female vocals, so I suggest you to turn it up a bit. And the fade out of the song seemed weird to me because of the female vocals echoing, so I suggest you to make the female vocals more quieter and quieter at the fade out of the song when all the beats are done with their thing. Overall, it's just nice.

ShadowShinobiTunes responds:

Thanks for the criticism

[I Know]

The piano really felt a bit classy to me although it did felt a bit like it was just randomly being pressed around, and that part where the piano just loops was pretty unexpected and caught me off guard. I liked how you used the vocals in this song.

The song is really legit though. You really saw a nice opportunity to do something dope, and I respect that. I would love to hear something more hard, or something kinda more 'transcending' as I would put it. But still nice.