I see what you were going with this. But in my opinion, the storyline got boring after the guy wearing the blue shirt shot his friend.

Lmao, I have a friend named Chris who "knows" his music. This is not bad actually, not too good either, but it's good enough in my books. Think you could've add the other side of the shade on the yellow-shirt guy.

Not bad... not bad for a practice-project. Tho' I noticed that the ball is only rebounded in the direction which it's moving, which can prove to be a bit annoying end game. Maybe have it rebounded in a random direction?

Well first of all, I feel like your drums need to be more punchier. From hearing this song, I think the way you utilized the sample didn't really flow well, like it just suddenly pops up without warning, like :04. Maybe you should use other parts of the sample and build up to the sound at :04. The end seems to be a bit chaotic for me, specifically at :59. Overall, it's okay I guess.

P.S. What were the samples you used? Cuz' I'm kind of diggin' it.

Lol, I didn't expect this to be Doki Doki Literature Club. It's actually pretty relaxing and calming listening to this version of the song. Sadly, tho, this song is too short, but I don't mind. There's also the drums, which I think is lacking, but then again it'll change the feel of the song. Overall, I kind of like it.

Damn, this feels video game-ish, like I'm in some warehouse or something. I think it was good when there wasn't so many high frequencies in this song, that's when the high hats appear, which really ruins the feel of the song. I suggest you to filter it to make it focus less on the high frequencies. Overall, I like it!

Lmao, his reaction tho!!

Dude that be really dank. Sick ma dudde