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[I Insist - The Gentleman Standoff]

I see what you were going with this. But in my opinion, the storyline got boring after the guy wearing the blue shirt shot his friend.

LOTAC responds:

May I suggest you watch the 1st half twice then? You might enjoy it more

[Minecraft Christmas tree cartoon animation]

Lol. It's not even Christmas yet (correct me if I'm wrong) and you're making a Christmas animation resolving around Minecraft. Would really love to see a bit more details, such as the ground being green instead of just plain white. I don't really get what happens at the end, like why didn't he pick up the wooden block? Overall, it's OK, I guess.

Zs-Animations responds:

He didn't pick up the wooden block , because he want all of the tree for Christmas :D

[My Music Knowledge In High School]

Lmao, I have a friend named Chris who "knows" his music. This is not bad actually, not too good either, but it's good enough in my books. Think you could've add the other side of the shade on the yellow-shirt guy.

[The Zombie Zealot]

Well, lmao. I watched this on a Sunday so, ayy!!!

I liked the script overall, that's the first thing I wanna touch on because sentence by sentence, it's perfect. I kinda want to hear more of their conversion (Dunnou y tho). The animation is smooth but unpolished, I thought the characters could've had thinner outline. A bit of shading here and there would be nice too.

Characters in the animation are all good. I love Eric's generic, 'is this morally right?' attitude. Although, I would've liked to hear more shouting, sorta. Still loved the animation overall, wished the animation was longer though.

Michael-T-Scott responds:

Heya! Glad you liked it!

I appreciate you wanting to hear more of the conversation, but there comes a point where you've made your point and anything beyond that is just getting redundant.

As for shouting: That seems to be the hallmark of comedy these days (mostly American). I'm not a fan of getting loud to be funny. It comes across as overcompensation for not having much substance. So if you watch any more of my material, you'll be disappointed in the decibel level department.

Hope you have the holiest of Sundays!

[getting lost]

From this, I actually like the story and the voice acting in this. But there are some problems in this animation. The way you animated this kind of looked a bit messy, so you got to improve on your art style. Overall, it's not bad, but not good either.

adunceanimates responds:

yeah, i know i'm really trying to get better though.

[Super kicks]

For your first animation, this wasn't too bad actually. Although some of the stuff might look a little out of place ( in my opinion ), it is not that bad. I really liked the cool effects in that animation you did. ( and the music ) Overall, it's "okay".

kaushalshah responds:

Thanks for the feedback! Appreciate it! I'll definitely try to do better in the next one.